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Showing posts with label story. Show all posts

September 19, 2016

Book Review (LV) The Lucky Leprechaun by Susan Day



Blurb

Tricked into going to Ireland by a wicked leprechaun, Astro and the gang are forced to find the King’s special pet.
Only this pet is not the type of animal any dog should be made to save.
It’s wicked and cruel and can make you obey its every command just by purring!
That’s right - the dogs are sent all over Ireland to save a cat!
 My Review
 
Ok, I'll say up front that The  Lucky Leprechaun is a great story  for kids to read. The pace, characters, and action are all perfectly suited. Children who are ready for a chapter book will be delighted to find Lucky Leprechaun is very easy to read. They will enjoy the team of dogs' adventure on trying to save a cat and, of course, it has a very happy ending. The story is delightfully zany and full of humor that is geared for kids.
The characters are Astro, Rocky, Alfie, Stella, Digger and Indy called Operatives. They belong to a secret group that save dogs from neglect. They are simply called:The Organisation. They are trapped by a leprechaun, Paddy O’Shifty, to rescue the King of the Leprechaun’s favorite pet.
The author created a terrific  story, perfect to read-aloud to kids, or to have them read in small-group reading settings. Great way to keep kids interested in reading. My 7 year old grandson loved it. He’s  asking for more. 
Thank you  Astro and all the Operatives!

November 22, 2014

Writing Tips (VI)


                      Flashbacks

Reblogged from:
http://www.examiner.com/article/flashbacks
by  Alison Guynes
 
A flashback is 'a device in the narrative of a motion picture, novel, etc., by which an event or scene taking place before the present time in the narrative is inserted into the chronological structure of the work.' The flashback is a plot device used in many forms of media that should be used cautiously and with care.

Kristen Lamb is a best-selling writer who has posted many blog posts on her blog about writing and tips for social media. Something she recently tackled was the flashback.
Flashbacks can break the flow of a story. An author can be progressing along, have their readers invested in the current scene, and then break off into a flashback. This can pull a reader out of the story. That is something you want to avoid at all costs because a reader who loses the thread of the story will put it down and not pick it up again. 

The thing to keep in mind with flashbacks is while there are suggestions, there are no hard and fast guidelines. There are also devices that may appear to be flashbacks that aren't. 

A story full of flashbacks causes problems for the reader as well. Generally, if an author has to put a large number of them into their manuscript, then there is a very good chance the author isn't telling the right story. If the events are so important that the flow has to be disrupted more than once or twice the story should be overhauled to make a more continuous storyline. 

Flashbacks should be kept to a minimum or eliminate them completely. Find a method for conveying the information in a more linear fashion. If it is backstory, look for a way to insert it where it doesn't disrupt the progression of the story.
Read the whole post at:http://www.examiner.com/article/flashbacks

July 8, 2014

Reviews (XXVIII)

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Not An Ordinary Paranormal Romance 
 5 stars
April 22, 2014
This review is from: Shadows of the Past (Kindle Edition)
Carmen Stefanescu weaves a story that ties a tragedy from the 1400's to a present day couple. Justice and closure take half a millennium to come to fruition.

Genevieve is a child that meets a harsh set of circumstances in the 1400's. Everyone she comes to care about meets with a horrible fate. Each time it seems she's found some semblance of happiness it's torn away. Under the most bizarre happenstance she finds her true love.

Moving forward 500 years we meet Anne. Her unsettled life is haunted by feelings and visions she tries desperately to unravel. The knocks in her love life come together as she fights through this ghostly mystery. I don't want to issue spoilers.

This book has elements of romance and horror that made it a fun read for me. I lean toward horror, usually, but found this tale captivating. It certainly moves along with well-crafted prose and finishes with a satisfying ending.
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June 23, 2014

Guest Promo (XIV)


 
 Release Date: June 20
Genres: Romance/Military/New Adult


  
Will his call of duty break both their hearts?

Losing her father in Desert Storm has left Stephanie James with a bitter soul when it comes to the military. As a college senior juggling a full course load, Steph's only goal is to graduate with honors at the end of the semester. She’s focused, determined, and a firm believer in all work and no play. Then she meets Brandon Walker at a New Year’s Eve costume party. Despite his disguise, Steph finds herself attracted to the camouflaged soldier who curls her toes with a scorching midnight kiss.

Brandon is an engineering major and ROTC student from the hills of Kentucky. Growing up as the son of a major general has given Brandon firsthand knowledge of the struggles military families sometimes face. Now that his father’s memory is fading, Brandon is even more determined to make his dad proud and graduate as an officer in the United States Army. Then he meets Stephanie, and suddenly, his focus is less on his military service and more on the pretty brunette who has stolen his heart. When he becomes aware of Steph’s resentment toward the military, he worries their relationship is doomed. 



When faced with the realization that she's fallen in love with a soldier, can Steph’s wounds from the past be healed with love in her present . . . and in her future?
 
http://www.amazon.com/Sydney-Logan/e/B0096LZK90/ref=sr_ntt_srch_lnk_1?qid=1401309284&sr=1-1
Regular Price: $2.99 (ebook) 
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Sydney Logan is an Amazon bestselling author and holds a Master's degree in Elementary Education. With the 2012 release of her debut novel, Lessons Learned, she made the transition from bookworm to author. Her second novel, Mountain Charm, was released in 2013. She is also the author of four short stories – Mistletoe Magic, The Little Drummer Boy, Force of Nature, and Stupid Cupid. A native of East Tennessee, Sydney enjoys playing piano and relaxing on her porch with her wonderful husband and their very spoiled cat.
 

May 22, 2014

Reviews (XXVII)



4.0 out of 5 stars Somewhat dark and well worth a read, March 7, 2014
By
Robert Clark
This review is from: Shadows of the Past (Kindle Edition)
Shadows of the Past, by Carmen Stefanescu, is, in effect, two novels intertwined into one. One, set several hundred years ago, revolves around Genevieve and, to a lesser extent, around Andrew. The other, set in the present, has Anne as the main protagonist with Neil as the secondary main character. While Shadows of the Past has to be considered a paranormal romance, the romance element is simply one part of a complex story.

The paranormal aspects of the book start out as hints and suppositions. Even well into the novel the reader has to wonder if the supernatural elements are really there, or are the products of the characters’ minds. Was the venomous snake crawling up to Neil a sending from some evil power or was it just a snake in the wrong place at the wrong time? Are the spectral figures Anne sees real or products of her imagination? Is there an actual linkage between Anne and Genevieve? Only toward the end does Stefanescu leave no doubt that the paranormal is operating as a major factor in her novel.

The constant movement within the two basic time frames, and some back and forth jumps within each, can prove a bit disconcerting at first. However, unlike some novels, in Shadows of the Past the two story lines are always clearly delineated and can’t be confused with each other. As the novel progresses smoothly this ceases to be a problem as Stefanescu draws the reader into the plot.

For those who like their paranormal romances light and fluffy with happy endings, Shadows of the Past probably isn’t a good choice. While most novels in this genre put the protagonists in danger or at least in crisis time after time, they almost always finish with a happy ever after ending. Stefanescu’s work is darker. The threats and problems are as much psychological as physical, and, as in real life, not every problem is easily solved and not every ending is happy.

This does not mean Shadows of the Past is a downer. In the critical story line the good guys win, it’s just that their victory doesn’t mean their lives will always be perfect. I found the concession to realism in the fantasy refreshing.

No novel is perfect, although the imperfections are often less in the novel itself than in the mindset of the reader. There are sections of Shadows of the Past that I found a bit repetitive. However, in all those cases, I could see where Stefanescu would have considered the retelling of specific events critical to make sure the reader understood what was happening.

There was one minor scientific glitch where DNA, instead of something like carbon dating, was used to determine the age of some bones. In the over-all context of the book, the error was irrelevant.

Apparently Shadows of the Past is intended as one book in a series, or at least a book with a sequel, because one rather ominous passage at the end certainly sets the stage for another book.

Carmen Stefanescu’s Shadows of the Past is a little different from the typical paranormal romance, which is a good thing, and is an enjoyable read.

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