Showing posts with label evil. Show all posts
Showing posts with label evil. Show all posts

October 3, 2014

Shadows of the Past Teaser II

Wild child Publishing

If you missed Teaser 1 you can find it posted on 1st October.

He nodded, saying, "Don't worry. We’re together. Have faith my love." He led the way into the forest.

Genevieve wrapped the dark mantle covering her shoulders more tightly around her and swallowed her fears as they began the cautious ride through the silent forest, through the silent night, enveloped by their own silent guilt.

Once St. Mary’s Abbey was out of sight, Andrew turned in the saddle to Genevieve.

"I'm sorry I didn't bid farewell to good old Ryan. He'll understand, I'm sure."

Genevieve bent her head and in a trembling voice replied, "Ryan's dead. That same evening, after your departure," she said, "the Abbess summoned Sister Francesca to her room. Later, Francesca told me our Mother Superior asked her if she had complaints about her life at the abbey, and if she thought something should be done to improve the living conditions. She also asked Francesca a lot of questions about me." Genevieve frowned and spoke in a wondering tone. "Whether any relatives of mine still lived, or if she knew of a place I might stay in case of unexpected circumstances."

Andrew raised his eyebrows. "Quite odd."

"Poor Francesca thought it odd too," Genevieve continued. "Baffled by Sister Clementa's unusual interest in an ordinary nun's opinion, she pretended she was satisfied with her life here. She didn't dare express her real feelings. She admitted she didn't have any idea about my family. The Abbess then offered her a cup of wine and insisted Francesca should drink it all as a sign of friendship towards her."

"Did she drink it?" Andrew asked in a voice tinged by worry.

"She couldn't avoid drinking the wine in the end. Though she remembered Sister Letitia's death after a similar invitation, Francesca had to obey. Half an hour later, Francesca fell ill and called me to her room to tell me what happened. I wish there was something I could have done to save her."

Genevieve shivered. In a small voice, she went on, "The Abbess hated her for being my friend. Francesca passed away in my arms. In the morning, the evil woman told everyone the plague had caused Francesca's unexpected death, and nobody was allowed to enter her room. Two men came and buried Francesca's body, like a sack of rotten potatoes. No stone placed above, no prayer said. I don’t know if the other nuns believed the Abbess' story. I don’t doubt for a second my dear friend died because of some poison the Abbess gave her." She stifled another sigh before continuing.

"All these three long days, wherever I came across the horrible woman, a grin of satisfaction sat on her face and the ice cold waves coming from her hit me.” A violent shudder shook Genevieve.  No tears shadowed her vision.

"There's something else Francesca told me before dying," she continued, her words strained. She raised her shaking hand to her brow. "Francesca said she saw the three books -- The Gospel, The Leech Book and The Bestiary, the ones the Abbess took from me -- on a shelf in her room. She didn't destroy them as she threatened. She kept them for herself. And Francesca insisted she didn’t have any doubt that Sister Clementa dealt with black magic."

"Black magic? The Abbess? Here under the monastery's roof? Even she couldn’t dare such blasphemous behavior."

“Francesca also said there was a strange statuette on the table: a repulsive three-headed woman with serpents coiled round their necks. The Abbess hurried to hide it when she entered. Francesca added that an odd shiver passed over her at the sight of the strange object."

"I'm not sure what she saw,” Andrew said. “It might have been a statuette of the Gorgons. Three hideous, winged demons with serpentine locks of hair and wide mouths showing powerful tusks of swine, named Medusa, Sthenno and Euryale." Andrew frowned. "In Greek mythology, Sthenno and Medusa are vicious female monsters. It doesn't sound good to me. Some say that the Gorgons' presence heralds misfortune and death."

Genevieve pressed her hand to her mouth. She shook her head and went on, "Earlier this evening, when I couldn't find Ryan in the garden, I went to his cottage. I intended to tell him about Francesca's pagan burial and wait there for you. I knocked at the door and, since I didn’t get any answer, I entered and found him. I thought at first, seeing him heaped in his chair with his eyes closed, that he was sleeping. Touching him, I realized he was cold. Dead, I mean. Poisoned too."

"Poisoned? Dear God! Are you sure?"

"Yes. I learned about such things, poisons and their cures, from old Bertha and from the Leech Book I inherited from her. The color of the foam on both Francesca's and Ryan's lips left no doubt. I couldn't find the gate key on the key ring Ryan kept in the cabin. I found it among his spares.  If he hadn’t showed me where he kept them, I couldn't have opened the gates and left the abbey."

"Poor old man. I liked his honesty and valued his knowledge. Before I left the abbey, I promised I would take him to my manor to be my gardener.  Save him from this evil woman's claws too. He was so glad at hearing it." Andrew shook his head. “I didn't want to believe all the rumors about the Abbess.  Now I think the woman may be a dangerous witch and murderess, on top of all her odd behavior."

Genevieve's hand fluttered to her throat. Large tears she couldn't suppress anymore gathered in her eyes.

"I'm the only one to blame for Francesca's and Ryan's deaths. If I hadn't talked to you if I hadn't been Francesca's friend, they'd both be alive. It's God's punishment I must pay for the sin of falling in love with you." Genevieve bowed her head under the burden of her grief.

"Don't blame yourself, my love. She'll burn in her own hell, sooner or later. It tears my heart to pieces to see you tormenting yourself."

A thick fog covered the whole mountain in gray cool folds, making the path between the old trees almost invisible. Just what they needed. On the other hand, they themselves were less visible to the possible followers.

The hair on Genevieve's arms pricked when the distant barking of dogs, sounding more like howling, came through the forest. To her knowledge, no animals inhabited the old forest. Except perhaps the legendary heralds of evil, the ghost dogs. The  howls rose again in the deepening dusk, and sent needles of ice along Genevieve's spine.

Andrew rubbed one hand across his forehead as if to brush away some unexplained fear troubling him.

What was he more afraid of: the dark, eerie forest with its bloodied past and lurking ghosts, or the two-legged beings that could become wilder and crueler than the wildest beast? She muffled a moan of grief.
To Be Continued
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October 1, 2014

Shadows of the Past - Teaser I

Wild Child Publishing

  In three different posts I will give you a teaser from my novel Shadows of the Past, that is the Prologue. Here is the first part. Enjoy!

    Prologue
England,  October1480

In the quiet solitude of a small, remote convent,

Only prayers seem alive

On the lips of holy sisters.

Candles flicker in their hands

Like lost souls in search of light,

And the yellowish, faint glimmer

Makes a halo round their whispers.
                (Eternity)

                                   * * *

The peal of the church bells from the abbey tower startled Genevieve. The sound added to her mounting anxiety.

The massive abbey loomed over the stone paved path.  All the nuns were at evening mass.  With a bit of luck her disappearance would go unnoticed for a few more hours. The Abbess would assume she was cleaning the toilets as ordered.

Fear skittered through Genevieve when she turned away from the abbey towards the path leading to town. Nothing stirred.  She hesitated.  Evil emanated from the forest surrounding the abbey. With a shiver, she leaned against the solid oak gates that flanked the abbey's main path. They had hidden her from detection for the past couple of hours, but how much longer would she be safe?

The mountain shadows grew thicker and closer.

She moved her weight from one leg to the other. They ached from so much standing, but she lacked the strength to return to the gardener's cottage and wait for Andrew's arrival as planned. Genevieve closed her tired eyes. The image of old Ryan, slumped dead in his chair in his cubicle, caught life in her mind and made her whole body ripple with fear.

She'd rather wait for Andrew here, outside.

Had he forgotten his promise? What if something terrible befell him during the last three days, or he had changed his mind? Why should he risk all for an ordinary nun?

Had his folks talked him into giving her up, made him see reason? Helping her out of her predicament meant a huge risk for him -- losing his family, his friends and his position among his peers. His words echoed in her mind. "I will risk everything for you, even life, if necessary."

A gust of wind swirled the dust on the path and dried the beads of sweat covering her temple. She shivered and pressed her cool hands to her cheeks. Had she misunderstood Andrew? No. She remembered vividly what he'd told her when they talked in Ryan's cottage. Three days. The evening of the third day, she should wait at Ryan's.

Her gaze strayed again to the impassive building of the abbey, her home for such a long time. She blamed the increasing wind for the sudden trail of dampness on her face, for the unmistakable tears blurring her vision. She blinked several times to clear her view. This was no time for tears.

Genevieve's brow wrinkled, and her breath caught in her throat.  Sister Francesca and Sister Benedicta smiled and waved at her from the abbey's entrance.

She shook her head and closed her eyes. Impossible. Both were dead. Genevieve wiped her tears and gazed at the abbey again. The image of the two Sisters, so dear to her, faded out.

Genevieve dared another peek along the path from the town.

Not a sound. Not a shadow.

Hopefully, Andrew hadn’t decided to follow the direct route through the forest. Danger lurked there. He should know all the dark legends people told about the cursed forest.

"Dear God, protect Andrew from the evil forest," she prayed; Andrew's face came to her as she’d last seen it three days before.

His kind loving eyes. His soft encouraging words. His tender touch.

She recalled the turmoil of emotions she’d experienced when she first met Andrew. Everything made sense now, in the light of the latest events. The warm waves coming from him and engulfing her, searing her body and soul, and the anxiety following those waves. It had been love at first sight. A feeling neither of them wanted to admit to until recently.

Love. Love and sin.

The monotonous muffled sound of hoof beats came up the path. Her gaze snapped to the dusty path. Nightfall descended with shadows, and she trembled with apprehension. What if the rider wasn't Andrew but someone summoned by the Abbess to dispose of Ryan's lifeless body and grab her too?

An eerie sensation of danger whispered in her ears, invaded her, and sent shivers down her spine. She should find shelter behind the bush of musk rose, and later, if everything proved safe, start down the path to town. She might meet Andrew along the road. If not. . .

She could no longer remain here. Once mass was over any of the other nuns might discover her and bring the information to the hateful Abbess. 

An overwhelming sense of relief washed over Genevieve when she saw that Andrew was the approaching rider. He came to the abbey riding his black mare and holding the reins of a bay for her. His eyebrows peaked with surprise; he inclined his head to his shoulder. The abbey's wide open gates with nobody in sight must have surprised him.

Genevieve understood his amazement. She'd told him three days ago about the Abbess's order to Ryan. Sister Clementa had asked the old gardener to keep the gates locked, even during the day.

Ryan said Clementa feared that one of the few nuns who disagreed with her behavior might leave the abbey unnoticed, at night. The Abbess didn't want any of them to take denouncing messages to the town's Archbishop.

No sooner had Andrew swung off his horse and tied the reins of both horses to a tree than Genevieve, managing to break out of her petrified state, hurried from behind the gates.

A warm smile brightened his face upon seeing her.  His smile melted away. Something about her expression must have warned him all wasn't well. His gaze, worried and questioning, lingered on her face.

"What's wrong, my darling? Have you changed your mind? Why are you here by the gate? I thought I’d find you in the old man's house? Someone could have seen you and alerted the Abbess," he said.

He pulled an ivory wood anemone from his saddlebag and gave it to Genevieve. "I picked this along the way. It looks like you: pretty and delicate.”

She heaved a sigh and accepted the flower. "Oh, Andrew, how sweet of you." She managed a smile.

"Come, we should leave at once," she said and glanced nervously over her shoulder. "Something terrible happened after you left for town. I think the Abbess found out about us. Our meeting in Uncle Ryan's cabin is no longer a secret. We have been overheard. For all I know someone spies on us even as we speak. I think the Abbess, or one of her 'friends,' is hovering somewhere nearby and listening to every word."

Andrew pulled her into his arms and tightened her in his embrace. "Calm down, please. Tell me what’s wrong."

"No, please, let's leave. There's danger all around us. I know what I'm saying."

“Then you can tell me what happened along the way." Andrew took hold of her hand as if trying to instill courage and confidence in her. He untied the reins of the horse he'd brought for her.  Placing a tender kiss on her forehead, he helped Genevieve up and then swung himself into the saddle. He turned his head as if to hide the worried frown across his face. "A scorned woman is worse than an unleashed hurricane," he said. Then he addressed Genevieve, "We'll follow the most direct route through the forest."

Genevieve flinched.

The forest. The very cursed forest. The main reason for the tragedy in her family.
To Be Continued 
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December 11, 2013

Reviews (XXI)



5.0 out of 5 stars Riveting! September 29, 2013
by Skelly


            "Shadows of the Past" by Carmen Stefanescu is a riveting story about souls reborn in a plight to overcome evil. Genevieve, a nun living at an abbey in the 1400s, did the one thing she promised would never happen. She fell in love. What's worse, the man, Andrew, was a priest. Even more surprising is that he had also fallen in love with her. He promised he would return for her so they could renounce their vows and marry. Fear gripped her heart when he didn't show up on time, especially after finding the resident gardener dead in a small house on the premises. She had to get away from Sister Clementa, the Abbess who only meant her ill and the cursed forest that brought death to anyone who entered.

            By itself, this plot spiked my interest, but the next chapter introduced another couple, Anne and Neil, with their own drama in the present time. Anne separated from Neil for two years after she caught him with her best friend, Gillian. In an effort to reconcile, Anne agreed to join Neil on a special trip to the country where they could rekindle their love. Wandering around the side of a mountain, unable to find the hotel where Neil had made reservations, they set up camp for the night. That was when Anne experienced her first dream of a mournful Genevieve. Soon after Anne attempted to help this sad nun from the past, the mean Sister Clementa arrived in spirit form to destroy anyone who dared connect to the man she could never have - in this case, Neil the reincarnate Andrew.

            With each chapter, the story revealed more secrets which kept me turning each page. I enjoyed that each era had its own chapter, helping me connect how the past events affected the present day relationships and supernatural occurrences.


            I recommend "Shadows of the Past" to anyone interested in a meaty story with twists and shocking turns. Genevieve's story does not leave one's heart untouched. The cast of characters are definitely memorable.   

5 stars posted on Amazon 29th SeptemberAmazon
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November 24, 2013

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Star's review posted on http://www.bibliophilicbookblog.com/2013/11/book-review-shadows-of-past-by-carmen.html and rated 4 of 5 stars


Review:

‘Shadows of the Past’ brings us Anne and Neil, a couple looking for reconciliation, and Genevieve, a centuries-dead nun looking for her eternal rest. Ms. Stefanescu’s writing is sublime – the descriptions are vivid and the characters are well-developed. The path to Anne and Neil’s happiness lies in solving the centuries-old mystery of Genevieve, but no one said it would be easy. 

I fell into ‘Shadows of the Past’ quickly and as the present was interspersed with the past, the story blossomed into one of star-crossed lovers, a great evil, and reincarnation. Beautifully written and decadently dark, ‘Shadows of the Past’ will capture your attention, keep you guessing, and surprise you with a interesting twist at the end.

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October 15, 2013

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Review by Kit Wylde   Posted on Goodreads and rated 4 stars
This review is from:
Shadows of the Past (Kindle Edition)



Anne and her boyfriend Neil are on vacation in England to reconcile. What is supposed to be a quick hike to a romantic inn turns into a nightmare. One night next to a forest that emanates evil draws Anne into a tragedy that played itself out over 500 years before. Genevieve, a 15th century nun, visits Anne and beckons her to follow. Anne cannot resist and finds herself in the forest, drawn to a giant oak tree. This vision proves to be a dream, but now Anne is compelled to discover the story of Genevieve and set her free, if she can. Caught in a freak, violent thunderstorm, Neil and Anne seek refuge in an abbey ruin. But the ruin is not without secrets, secrets that could see both of them killed. For an evil stalks what should be blessed ground, and it seeks to prevent the two lovers from reconciliation and Anne from helping Genevieve.

Stefanescu has done her research. The 15th century was not a romantic time period, and Stefanescu brings it to life in all its “glory.” Beginning less than ten years before the beginning of the Spanish Inquisition, superstition and fear ran rampant and being branded a witch meant certain death. The corruption in the church at this time is legendary and eventually led to Martin Luther, his 95 Theses, and the Protestant Reformation in 1517. The plague still cropped up randomly throughout Europe and England, wiping out entire villages. While the Renaissance had begun in other parts of Europe, it was just filtering into England as the War of the Roses was ongoing, only ending with the death of King Richard II at Bosworth Field in 1485.

In short, this was not an easy time to live.

Against this backdrop, we meet Genevieve, whose life is not surprisingly filled with desperation, sorrow, prejudice, and struggle. We follow her life through its many tragedies and few triumphs. As we do, we can only marvel at her resilient spirit, her ability to continue to love even though she has lost so much, and her desire to live despite it all. Finally, when all seems hopeless, she finds true love. But it is a forbidden love doomed from the outset as she is a nun and he is a priest. What will become of them?

The author does an excellent job seamlessly toggling back and forth between the story of Anne and Genevieve. I am more drawn to Anne’s story than Genevieve’s. This is because of the flowery prose in Genevieve’s section. Although this type of prose is indicative of the time period, it is not to my taste. That would be my only quibble with the book, even as I understand the reasoning behind it.

Still, this is a compelling story. I read it quickly and wanted to find out what became of Genevieve’s spirit and Anne and Neil’s relationship. I would gladly read a second book, if there is to be one. (The author certainly left an opening for a sequel.)

I would recommend it to people who enjoy atmospheric stories of the paranormal, love, passion, and history.

September 9, 2013

Book Reviews (XI)

Book Review: A Satan Carol by Alan S. Kessler

Book description:

Nostalgic for the Inquisition and plague, Satan feels neglected by the modern world that no longer cares about heresy or blames him for disease and death. He plans to create a new genesis, a place where people will love him. For that, his son needs just the right soul.

A Satan Carol is a horror story with a message for those who want to understand God's apparent absence as the intersection of freewill and choice. It is a story with religious themes written for a secular reader. It is, in the end, a tale about family values even if they originate in hell.

My Review


Reading this novel brought to my mind the morality plays of the 15th and 16th centuries which involve a direct conflict between right and wrong or good and evil and from which a moral lesson may be drawn.

The novel starts in Ireland 1848, with a moving depiction of the Irish famine, the pressing atmosphere, and the people who try to survive; with Meg who believes herself blessed by Christ. She runs along coaches to beg for the rent she has to pay to her landlord Mr. Green. In Liam, her son, the villagers see a healer whose power could only come from Christ.  

In the same chapter, the story moves then, all of a sudden, in Massachusetts, one hundred and eighty years later and we meet fourteen year old Katie Katz and her whole family.

Then we meet Orem, in the past and find out why Satan favored him with visions.

After reading the first two chapters, I had the impression that things were moving too slow. The story unfolds in alternating points of view. It's not the type of story one calls a page turner. It has a multitude of characters and back-stories I lost track of at some moment.  The reader must pay attention to all the details in order to keep track of everything. The main lead belongs to Mr. Green, aka Satan, who needs a soul for his son. He wants to prove God that he isn't as bad as everyone considers him to be, and that he also can create something good. But does Father love me in return?/Not in this world but maybe in the next/when He sees with pride/how I too can create something out/of toxic nothing. An interesting, manipulating and conniving character. Mr. Green was a true believer in the holy church of his plans.

I can't say I felt empathy for any of the characters, no matter how good or bad they were. I'd have liked more insight into them.

As for the ending, I have mixed feelings regarding the way everything was wrapped up. An odd combination of macabre and religious themes. Maybe I didn’t get the exact message of this book.

Disclosure: My copy was offered by the author in exchange for an honest review.
Rating: Three stars.

July 15, 2013

Blog Blitz with Author Matt Campbell





Christmas in July, unwrap a summer ebook blog blitz, welcomes Matt Campbell

Darr has the ability to hear the disembodied voices of the spirits. Unfortunately, the spirits have nothing useful to say. A young, inexperienced Spirit Summoner, Darr often wonders at the purpose of such a useless ability. When an unnatural fire sweeps through his village, Darr sets out on a mission of self-discovery and curiosity.

As a Spirit Summoner, Darr learns he can enter the spirit realm. There he has access to the elemental magic contained within the Sephirs, legendary artifacts that once promised balance for a world turning towards chaos. Now, the Sephirs’ powers are dwindling since their untimely disappearance, and Darr is at the center of the quest to find and recover them. Suddenly, Darr’s curiosity is a whirlpool threatening to drown him, but his compulsion to see things through locks him into a journey attracted to disaster.
For the Sephirs do more than restrain the primal forces of magic. The Devoid, an evil long caged and hungry, has begun to loosen the bars of its prison. If the Sephirs fail, the Devoid will escape and feed on the Light of the living until nothing remains.

And the Devoid knows Darr’s lack of confidence is the key needed to free itself completely.

THE CHOSEN OF THE LIGHT: SPIRIT SUMMONER is an epic fantasy novel, coming in 2013 from Wild Child Publishing.


Some thoughts from Matt:
Do I Really Need A Reason To Write Fantasy?

For some people fantasy is a waste of time, a distraction from the present and concrete facts about the world around us. For others, fantasy is the blood that flows through our veins, infiltrating every little aspect of our lives. Some remain indifferent to fantasy yet indulge in similar diversions. So why do I write fantasy when I’m only appealing to a small target audience? Stephen King has part of the answer in his book On Writing:

“Writing isn't about making money, getting famous, getting dates, getting laid, or making friends. In the end, it's about enriching the lives of those who will read your work, and enriching your own life, as well.”

Ok, so I write fantasy (or anything for that matter) in order to enrich the lives of my readers and myself. Sounds simple enough, but like I said, King has provided only part of the answer.

Fantasy writing provides an outlet for imagination
It’s no secret that writing is therapeutic. Journaling can be a great source of stress relief for many of life’s troubles. Writing helps to organize our thoughts and get them out into the world, even if it’s onto a piece of notebook paper or typed into a blog post. Fiction writing in general (and reading as well) provides a similar release. For me, writing fantasy is a necessity. I’ve always had an overactive imagination filling my head with a multitude of worlds, characters, and ideas based in another reality. Writing has been the only way to focus my imagination, and the fantasy genre seemed to be the only place I could put those ideas to use.
The real world sometimes has no solutions
There’s no doubt the world we live in seems crazy sometimes. As individuals, human beings are filled with conflicting thoughts, beliefs, and ideas. As a society, groups of individuals also have conflicting thoughts and ideas. What seems like a perfectly logical or necessary course of action to one person might be completely abhorrent to another. Oftentimes, it’s frustrating or even offensive to another to argue your point. I believe most of us simply try to live our lives as quietly as possible, rolling with the punches as best we can and making small differences where possible.
Not everyone has the power or the voice to make those small differences though, but I’ve found that writing fantasy provides a way to do so. If our fantasies are a distorted reflection of our reality, then the problems of reality come along equally distorted. In my experience, writing about fantasy worlds allows me to explore solutions to the very real problems around me, which in turn, allows my readers a chance to explore my point-of-view.
Possibilities and dreams
Along the same thread, fantasy writing allows my readers to explore the possibilities of the real world. Of course, anything is possible, but maybe not probable. That’s where dreams come in. Dreams are like automatic imagination, and imagination is fuel for fantasy writing. When I’m writing about one of my worlds, where healing can be done with a single touch or skills are transferrable through inanimate objects, I’m not only exploring possibilities in our own world. These are my dreams of a world not brought into reality…yet.
Which brings me to my final reason for writing fantasy…
It is real
Specifically, it’s real to me. I write fantasy because the stories I weave are as real to me as the trees around me, the roof over my head, and the family supporting me. I learned early on in my life that the reality of my stories were transferable to others. By writing down my ideas and sharing my words, my readers can find that same reality. Is that insanity? No. But it might be a little crazy, though no crazier than anything else.

In the end, King had it mostly right. We write to enrich the lives of our readers as well as ourselves. For me, writing fantasy is a little more than that. It’s about sharing my imagination, realizing the possibilities or our small world, and dreaming of the extraordinary. I can only hope my readers feel the same.



Author Bio:
Over the last twenty years, Matt Campbell has been putting his love for fantasy down on paper. He began writing at the age of 11, but he has been telling stories long before then. With interests in writing, woodworking, parenting, comic books, movies, and video games, Matt always has something new to write about and to inspire him.

Matt’s passion for wonder and love for the fantastic inspired him to write his debut novel, The Chosen of the Light. At a staggering 400,000 words, Matt was forced to split his novel up into three books, the first of which, Spirit Summoner, is due later in 2013.

He lives in Western Washington with his wife, Jen, and son, Jacobi.

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